Lamazar1's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[[Leaf]]

Nice!

I think u did the right thing naming it a trance. idk what others might think so this is just my opinion lol. overall a really great track!
10/10
5/5

fosterCHILD16 responds:

haha alright thanks

peace
-fosterchild

[[Voyage]]

this...

is exactly what u said it was, calming. I actually layed down and almost fell asleep listening to this because its like those those sound FX orbs that are supposed to soothe ur mind. any ways great work

fosterCHILD16 responds:

haha sweet, thanks for the review

peace
-fosterchild

[[Invasion] 2.0]

Thumbs up 4 the remake

this is alot, i mean ALOT better than the other one definately! I absolutely love it XD
Though i must agree about the sound around 2:38 and the burp ending.
10/10
4/5

fosterCHILD16 responds:

yeah ill work on the ending and try to get a 3.0 up soon, thanks for reviewing!

peace
-fosterchild

[[Invasion]]

great!

The high frequencies as the ppl before me said were a little deafening when played very loudly, and those claps...well just get rid of them. overall great song tho!

fosterCHILD16 responds:

thanks man, i think i cleaned most of that up in version 2 but glad to get feedback

peace
-fosterchild

[[Burst]]

hey

i took ur advice and decided to check it out. Thx 4 that :) this really is a great song! nothing is wrong with it at all.
5/5
10/10
also i loved that weird sound that kicked in around 1:45 XD

fosterCHILD16 responds:

haha no problem, glad you like this
thanks for reviewing

peace
-fosterchild

[[Emotion]]

pretty good....

could use a little improvement tho... it was a little offbeat, and the claps thru most of the song were a little annoying. Also that weird sound that kicked in around 1:20 was also bad. but other than that it was pretty great man! goin to check more of ur songs definitely.
5/5
9/10

fosterCHILD16 responds:

yeah this is definately still a work in progress. Thanks for the review and suggestions, i know that sound isnt too good i was desperate to get something to work and kinda rushed it. Ill try and get this fixed up pretty soon. If u want my suggestion u should check out [Burst], thats the song im most proud of.
thanks again

peace
-fosterchild

[_-={Apocalypse}=-_]

hey im finally back after about a week or two

and i have another great story to fit this!!

Leon fell to the ground as the demon shot him with an energy ball of electricity.
"Leon!" Alma screamed as he was falling, and Lamazar (me!) ran over to where Leon was picked him up on his shoulders and brought him to Alma and right before the demons spikey tail crushed them Lamazar had just enough time to put his shield up and block it. "Go and leave this place," he said,"and don't worry about me. After all, the only thing I ever wanted is for this beast to be dead and get revenge for my family." A tear ran down his cheek as the tail striked his shield again and it shattered. Alma's footsteps could be heard as she dragged Leon away from the area. "Alright you bastard, that was my father's shield and I will get revenge for them all!" As he hit the demon with his mother's sword the Holy Avenger he cried, "That's for my mother who you killed while she was sleeping because you were afraid of her sword!" The demon recoiled and screamed high pitched as Lamazar hit him yet again. And that's for my father who's shield even stopped all your minions with one mighty bash to the ground!" The demon squealed in pain high pitched as Lamazar yelled, "And for my brother Leon who you could've just now killed and if he's dead, I'll even fight you for an eternity if it means getting revenge!" He sliced the demon's leg nearly off so far and left a big gash in its face. The demon took no notice and shot Lamazar with the same energy ball used on Leon. Lamazar was hurt and on his knees now but stood slowly and was determined to never give up. Blood and sweat were mixed together as it all dripped on the flor from both the combatants. Lamazar smiled and said, "Very well, it seems you won't back down, and I have but one option left." He charged up all energy he had left to the center of his body and prepared for an attack that had 50% chance of killing him but would surely kill his opponent. "List'iner Vocho TePair!"
He and the whole cavern along with the demon exploded. Leaving nothing but rubble dust and a place for people to dig through looking for him or the demon.
As Alma and Leon showed up they began to have tears roll down their cheeks knowing what Lamazar had done and as they cried a metal gloved hand that belonged to the man who survived burst through and with it Lamazar with a yell of triumph.
I hope you liked it man as usual 5/5 10/10
keep up the great work

MaestroRage responds:

A brutal and epic battle for sure. Lamazar doesn't take nothing from nobody it seems >:(!

The story flows well, the events and descriptions present, the sentences seemed a little unnatural, for example

""Go and leave this place," he said,"and don't worry about me. After all, the only thing I ever wanted is for this beast to be dead and get revenge for my family."

could be written as

"Go, leave this place!" he said, "Don't worry about me, the only thing I could ever want is to destroy the beast that killed my family!"

small changes, but important ones. I of course suggest these to you because I do think you have a talent for writing, and will eventually become really good. Keep up the good work!

Concerning the story itself. It takes a might big man to eradicate an entire cavern and survive! But that just makes it all the more epic. Risking his own life for the spell that would crush so many. It was an interesting idea to give the mother the blade and the father the shield, where normally it would be the reverse...

thank you for the review, i'm glad you liked it!

[_-={He's a Pirate Dance Remix]

lol i read ur response to polarbear's review

that's so freakin funny! By god you should so do that like when all ur friends are over at your house. just tell them to wait in a room and turn out the lights running in and saying that!
Also great song man you've definitely got my 10 and 5

MaestroRage responds:

nah my friends are all too serious for this kind of thing. They'd be confused and alarmed, and then one of them would likely try to beat me up with my own arm... the monsters >:(

I suppose I could try though. If you never hear from me again you'll know how it went...

thank you for the review, i'm glad you liked it!

[_-={Brotherhood}=-_]

brotherhood indeed!

three brother's sit around the fire exiled from their kingdom and as they sit there they wonder where to go and what to do. They still got their swords and armor but what good is that? If they approach another kingdom for acceptance they'll be shot down on contact by archers. So they've decided to ditch their shields and armor, but keep the swords and have gone to seek accpetance.

Maestro i have 2 brother's and they're those people that will stick with you through life no matter what and wil also protect you if necessary its great to have brothers and know that they'll always be there for you. I just wanted you to know that this is what the song makes me think about...the story and the song truly does resemble brotherhood.

MaestroRage responds:

I also have a brother, and a sister, family is one of those links that can undergo heavy strain, heavy punishment, and still hold true at the end. Like magnets, they can separated, but to bring them back together is fairly easy.

I am glad you felt the sensation of brotherhood, I really wanted to exhibit that feeling. Your story is also one that moved me. I felt bad for these brothers, and in my own little way, I wished them the best. Again, wishing happiness to non existing entities, many would call me stupid. Let them...

Thank you for the review, i'm glad you liked it!

[_-={These Angels of War}=]

Great songs come from great ppl...

and you've really got great talent!
When i heard this the first thing that came to mind was olden times and a family put together to defend themselves in gladiator pit until only one person remains standing. That's what i heard and i hope that actually fits because at certain parts i was sure i was wrong but others sure i was right. Any ways these songs stir emotions and i expect some great things from you Maestro.

MaestroRage responds:

the idea is right, the original story for this song was great and noble warriors, once seen as mighty symbols of peace, move out with terrifying bloodlust. Their equipment of war and destruction far more powerful then the people were led to believe!

So the idea of putting people into a fight, is an accurate one, there is fighting, and it is of a bitter, angry state, with a defiant noble struggle sense to it.

I am glad you expect great things Lamazar, truth be told I expect to one day to be in a position to be able to help many people with their projects.

Thank you for the review, i'm glad you liked it!