Lamazar1's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[-Glorious morning-]

awesome...

I absolutely love it but i seem to have a problem downloading it, oh well anyways its a great piece and you got my best votes!
10/10
5/5

[_-={Apocalypse}=-_]

hey im finally back after about a week or two

and i have another great story to fit this!!

Leon fell to the ground as the demon shot him with an energy ball of electricity.
"Leon!" Alma screamed as he was falling, and Lamazar (me!) ran over to where Leon was picked him up on his shoulders and brought him to Alma and right before the demons spikey tail crushed them Lamazar had just enough time to put his shield up and block it. "Go and leave this place," he said,"and don't worry about me. After all, the only thing I ever wanted is for this beast to be dead and get revenge for my family." A tear ran down his cheek as the tail striked his shield again and it shattered. Alma's footsteps could be heard as she dragged Leon away from the area. "Alright you bastard, that was my father's shield and I will get revenge for them all!" As he hit the demon with his mother's sword the Holy Avenger he cried, "That's for my mother who you killed while she was sleeping because you were afraid of her sword!" The demon recoiled and screamed high pitched as Lamazar hit him yet again. And that's for my father who's shield even stopped all your minions with one mighty bash to the ground!" The demon squealed in pain high pitched as Lamazar yelled, "And for my brother Leon who you could've just now killed and if he's dead, I'll even fight you for an eternity if it means getting revenge!" He sliced the demon's leg nearly off so far and left a big gash in its face. The demon took no notice and shot Lamazar with the same energy ball used on Leon. Lamazar was hurt and on his knees now but stood slowly and was determined to never give up. Blood and sweat were mixed together as it all dripped on the flor from both the combatants. Lamazar smiled and said, "Very well, it seems you won't back down, and I have but one option left." He charged up all energy he had left to the center of his body and prepared for an attack that had 50% chance of killing him but would surely kill his opponent. "List'iner Vocho TePair!"
He and the whole cavern along with the demon exploded. Leaving nothing but rubble dust and a place for people to dig through looking for him or the demon.
As Alma and Leon showed up they began to have tears roll down their cheeks knowing what Lamazar had done and as they cried a metal gloved hand that belonged to the man who survived burst through and with it Lamazar with a yell of triumph.
I hope you liked it man as usual 5/5 10/10
keep up the great work

MaestroRage responds:

A brutal and epic battle for sure. Lamazar doesn't take nothing from nobody it seems >:(!

The story flows well, the events and descriptions present, the sentences seemed a little unnatural, for example

""Go and leave this place," he said,"and don't worry about me. After all, the only thing I ever wanted is for this beast to be dead and get revenge for my family."

could be written as

"Go, leave this place!" he said, "Don't worry about me, the only thing I could ever want is to destroy the beast that killed my family!"

small changes, but important ones. I of course suggest these to you because I do think you have a talent for writing, and will eventually become really good. Keep up the good work!

Concerning the story itself. It takes a might big man to eradicate an entire cavern and survive! But that just makes it all the more epic. Risking his own life for the spell that would crush so many. It was an interesting idea to give the mother the blade and the father the shield, where normally it would be the reverse...

thank you for the review, i'm glad you liked it!

[_-={He's a Pirate Dance Remix]

lol i read ur response to polarbear's review

that's so freakin funny! By god you should so do that like when all ur friends are over at your house. just tell them to wait in a room and turn out the lights running in and saying that!
Also great song man you've definitely got my 10 and 5

MaestroRage responds:

nah my friends are all too serious for this kind of thing. They'd be confused and alarmed, and then one of them would likely try to beat me up with my own arm... the monsters >:(

I suppose I could try though. If you never hear from me again you'll know how it went...

thank you for the review, i'm glad you liked it!

[ZENON Drum Solo--_--]

Nice!

my friends wants to know what drums you used and stuff cuz he's sort of a drummer and him me and my friends are startin a band anyways. The sanre sounded sweet and you hammered it so fast! Jesus man you could make alot of money!

[_-={Brotherhood}=-_]

brotherhood indeed!

three brother's sit around the fire exiled from their kingdom and as they sit there they wonder where to go and what to do. They still got their swords and armor but what good is that? If they approach another kingdom for acceptance they'll be shot down on contact by archers. So they've decided to ditch their shields and armor, but keep the swords and have gone to seek accpetance.

Maestro i have 2 brother's and they're those people that will stick with you through life no matter what and wil also protect you if necessary its great to have brothers and know that they'll always be there for you. I just wanted you to know that this is what the song makes me think about...the story and the song truly does resemble brotherhood.

MaestroRage responds:

I also have a brother, and a sister, family is one of those links that can undergo heavy strain, heavy punishment, and still hold true at the end. Like magnets, they can separated, but to bring them back together is fairly easy.

I am glad you felt the sensation of brotherhood, I really wanted to exhibit that feeling. Your story is also one that moved me. I felt bad for these brothers, and in my own little way, I wished them the best. Again, wishing happiness to non existing entities, many would call me stupid. Let them...

Thank you for the review, i'm glad you liked it!

[_-={These Angels of War}=]

Great songs come from great ppl...

and you've really got great talent!
When i heard this the first thing that came to mind was olden times and a family put together to defend themselves in gladiator pit until only one person remains standing. That's what i heard and i hope that actually fits because at certain parts i was sure i was wrong but others sure i was right. Any ways these songs stir emotions and i expect some great things from you Maestro.

MaestroRage responds:

the idea is right, the original story for this song was great and noble warriors, once seen as mighty symbols of peace, move out with terrifying bloodlust. Their equipment of war and destruction far more powerful then the people were led to believe!

So the idea of putting people into a fight, is an accurate one, there is fighting, and it is of a bitter, angry state, with a defiant noble struggle sense to it.

I am glad you expect great things Lamazar, truth be told I expect to one day to be in a position to be able to help many people with their projects.

Thank you for the review, i'm glad you liked it!

[_-={Blood Fields}=-_]

i have yet another strory for you maestro!

The king's best knight stood at the door of the king's chamber fighting off the attackers alone with his sword. He was the only one left and he knew it was his duty to protect the king until reinforcements arrived from the king's allies. this man was referred to as the Silver Knight, though his real name was Razamal.
Although he was outnumbered, he would figh to the end and as he slashed down yet another soldier he never faltered as an arrow hit him in the chest. He kept fighting and the hall was stained with enemy blood as yet another arrow hit him.

Still he kept fighting never giving up, determined not to let his king and queen down. He sliced one more time before he was hit with yet another arrow, and this one was poison tipped. As he kept fighting he was getting dizzy and he knew by now he was poisoned. He sliced one more man thinking the hall was finally empty until another wave of men charged and another arrow hit him. He fell to his knees and cried out to the gods,"Why this kingdom!?!Why would you let us down!?!I've protected this kingdom and fought for it praying to you before every battle! Why let us down now!?!" and as the wave of men got closer the knights form the king's allies rode in as Razamal fell forwards and stopped breathing.The legendary Silver Knight was noble and died defending the things that were closest to him.

Now you get to decide if the king's allies win or if the enemy does it's all up to you Maestro.

MaestroRage responds:

I love the epic noble soldier scene :'(

Razamal was clearly a man of priorities. So strong his conviction and love for his empire and king, he can take 3 arrows before the physical barriers he's already broken begin to strain. For this soldier Razamal, who has given everything, for everything that meant dear to him, I have already decided long ago the troops were victorious.

Taking away this empire for this loss would just not be right...

Thank you for the review and story, i'm glad you liked the piece!

[_-={A Place for Dreams}=-]

you've done it again man!

all ur songs somehow stir up my emotions and i just dont know how.. omg its like sad and hopeful and all these other emotions ...Even a bit of love! that's amzing idk how u do it but you have a great talent keep up the great work!

MaestroRage responds:

A song is perceived in depth only as far as a listener can take it. The fact you are hearing, and sensing all these feelings means you have, in some way, seen the image and scenario I used to create the song itself.

I'm glad you liked it Lamazar! Thank you deeply for the review!

[Darkness After]

wtf do u mean a school project?!?

dude it must've been a "who can make the best metal song presentation"!!!
This is freakin great! but seriously waht was the project!?! im still in school and i would really like to know in case i have to face something like this!lol freakin amazing!
5/5
10/10

[~Stone Angel~]

Hulkbuster sux balls!

I loved it man but that idiot is just one of those people that does't have that musical ear that you have!when you hear something you like you go for it! that's waht makes us rockers united! i haven't submitted anything yet but i will soon and then we can rub it all in his face! SCREW YOU HULKBUSTER!
5/5
10/10
just to piss him off lol!