Lamazar1's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[[Burst]]

hey

i took ur advice and decided to check it out. Thx 4 that :) this really is a great song! nothing is wrong with it at all.
5/5
10/10
also i loved that weird sound that kicked in around 1:45 XD

fosterCHILD16 responds:

haha no problem, glad you like this
thanks for reviewing

peace
-fosterchild

[[Emotion]]

pretty good....

could use a little improvement tho... it was a little offbeat, and the claps thru most of the song were a little annoying. Also that weird sound that kicked in around 1:20 was also bad. but other than that it was pretty great man! goin to check more of ur songs definitely.
5/5
9/10

fosterCHILD16 responds:

yeah this is definately still a work in progress. Thanks for the review and suggestions, i know that sound isnt too good i was desperate to get something to work and kinda rushed it. Ill try and get this fixed up pretty soon. If u want my suggestion u should check out [Burst], thats the song im most proud of.
thanks again

peace
-fosterchild

[300 Unleashed]

SPARTANS!!!

TONIGHT... WE DINE... IN HELL!!

[_-={The Tanks Thunder}=-_]

great song Maestro

its really great and if u and winterwind NS had a collab it'd be really great :)! sadly however i don't have a story for this one :( anyways great song man keep up the good work.

[_-={Wrath of a Broken Soul}=-_]

wow!

Hey maestro I'm back after a couple of weeks has it been? i lost track anyways if you didn't get the story i sent you sorry...my computer erased it. But i can write you one right now!

Onitsukay fell to his knees, he couldn't believe he'd been tricked. His village was now being destroyed by hellspawn demons, and it was all because he misinterpreted what the demon's pact was.
He stood and rushed down the hill seeing if there was anyone he could save after his terrible mistake. He pulled a few shurikens away from his belt and was getting close to the village gates.
He immediately knew what was and why the place was being destroyed so easily. What had happened to the militia? He discarded the thought and ran down one of the dirt roads kicking up dust and crunching the gravel beneath his feet. He turned a left saw a giant stomping on a house, and a few people screaming and trying to get away.
He jumped up on a roof, threw five shurikens in the beasts back, and jumped on its back. It knew he was there and was trying to crush him with mighty and huge hands. Each time he struck his own back shockwaves knocked Onitsukay off balance.
Onitsukay drew his sword and began stabbing the monster's head. As the monster fell and the people escaped another appeared and said, "Well, it seems that even my most trusted genaral stood not even the slightest chance against you. So try me!"
This creature was about the same size as Onitsukay, but was alot faster. Onitsukay tried throwing shurikens at him, but they either thinked into the ground or a wall of a nearby building.
Then the monster made the mistake of going in for the kill by trying to stab him straight on. Onitsukay grabbed the hand of this weird creature, holding the monster in place, but keeping the blade in his stomach.
He remarked, "Bet you weren't expecting that!" and decapitated the thing before him, let the hand go and the boody fall.
"At least I may have made up for what I did." And with that he went to go fight more demons while bleeding to death from the wound in his stomach.

As usual another Maestrorific piece from you! Keep up the great work.

[ButterFly Rave]

RAVE!! XD

I love rave songs so much and to think of butterfly rave! pure genius great work

[Better Off Alone (PH-Mix)]

O.O nice!

this is really great man, but i have to agree with everyone else, the claps were annoying at times. anyways its a great piece keep up the good work

[{dj-N} Not Alone [Remastered]]

0.o

awesome man!
10/10
5/5

[{dj-N} Maelstrom]

awesome man

its one of the best tracks on ng thats for sure! this is one of the best i've heard in a while.
10/10
5/5